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Szelcetical
SzelceticalLv11mth
2024-10-16 12:36

Me likes pretty girl and likes music. Me likes novels, and me likes good write. Me likes so I bite when I see gud, and gud I see. Yes indeed good ic is good ic.

My Ascension: Greatest Idol System!

Rimotoamano
4.9
9 Chs

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The_Broken_Author
The_Broken_AuthorLv13

Wonderful starting.... A good read. The author has a really good narrative and nice description. Just a little downside on the dialogue... But I guess it's only from the first chapter. Nice interactive system. I'll definitely read more to find out

1mth

Lonely_Apex
Lonely_ApexLv3

A good novel that has good development and also reflects real life in the book. The writing is smooth and mostly without blemishes. I have to say, the author really did a nice job in the beginning

1mth
DaoistYuuishi
DaoistYuuishiLv1

I really appreciate the actually good grammar. Better than a good 80-90% of novels here. Also, I really enjoy music industry novels and so far it’s holding up quite well, thanks for that author, it’s pretty refreshing.

1mth
Rimotoamano
RimotoamanoAuthor

Shameless review from author here! While I don't know if everyone will enjoy this novel, what I can say is I'll do my best to limit everyone's dislike of it. The style of this novel is and will always be more casual and laid-back. I'm also trying my best to make mc more relatable and realistic, and giving actual depth to the writing and plot unlike a lot of recent system novels. I hope you enjoy, and give me good reviews, that's all! Author, out.

1mth
XXGSWAI
XXGSWAILv11

I’m liking the casualness of the writing and how simple everything is yet also detailed. It’s simple in a high quality kind of way. It’s not without its mistakes but it feels refreshing. It’s also not a completely original concept but it feels new in its own way. I deeply appreciate the thought you put into this as well. Nothing feels unnatural or inconsistent that I’ve noticed so far either. So while it’s not the best it could be yet I’m willing to grant a 5 star review because I believe it will be soon.

1mth
La_Sleek007
La_Sleek007Lv3

Although just started, I'm loving every bit of this novel. Looking forward to more chapters.

1mth
Adwit_ojha
Adwit_ojhaLv3

Reveal spoiler

1mth
Avallanti
AvallantiLv1

I love the story! Especially the concept so far for this novel. It’s not very covered yet so it doesn’t feel bland to read. I also really appreciate the fact that your scenes with characters haven’t fallen flat! It feels like I’m simply looking at a textbook with some others novels. Thank you!

1mth
Yuuirimoto_Sakato
Yuuirimoto_SakatoLv1

Overall a great writing quality and story. Even Cameron as a character and almost every character in this story so far has more layers than I’d expect from a typical little system novel. Very nice. Only thing could be better is updates. Cuz I need more chaps.

1mth
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