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I’m liking the casualness of the writing and how simple everything is yet also detailed. It’s simple in a high quality kind of way. It’s not without its mistakes but it feels refreshing. It’s also not a completely original concept but it feels new in its own way. I deeply appreciate the thought you put into this as well. Nothing feels unnatural or inconsistent that I’ve noticed so far either. So while it’s not the best it could be yet I’m willing to grant a 5 star review because I believe it will be soon.

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