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DarthFalcon
DarthFalconLv13mth
2024-07-20 00:32

Everything sucks except the update frequency and world background. The same scenario is repeated in the book. MC is very arrogant, has no respect for other people. He looks down on everyone but I think he's just stupid. He's interested in everything except magic. I don't even understand why he's still coming to Hogwarts, all he does is provoke people, at this rate he'll turn the entire wizarding world against him

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VIJETH_R
VIJETH_RLv3

I don't see where he is provoking people the guy sent many people sprawling but even after that they keep coming like bugs,what I mean to tell is he does not want to have much contact with this world so he is avoiding people as much as possible

DarthFalcon
DarthFalconLv1

If you want a place where people don't care about you, you need to change the environment you were in before. But he didn't do that, he didn't leave even though he knew there was a dark lord in England, or he continued at school even though he was bullied at school. He could have learned the password to his dormitory door by asking the teacher or other students, but he chose to destroy the wall. When someone invited him to follow Tom, he criticized and insulted them when he refused. He wanted to be an ordinary student, but he wandered around the forbidden forest every day.(G.T)

VIJETH_R:I don't see where he is provoking people the guy sent many people sprawling but even after that they keep coming like bugs,what I mean to tell is he does not want to have much contact with this world so he is avoiding people as much as possible
VIJETH_R
VIJETH_RLv3

he did not want to hide any of his powers and he crushed the door because he wanted to get rid of trouble,but yeah I except that the author has made others brainless,typical young masters,but u still can at least give four as characters are not 2d and has good word building and proper grammar,and a consistent mc.

DarthFalcon:If you want a place where people don't care about you, you need to change the environment you were in before. But he didn't do that, he didn't leave even though he knew there was a dark lord in England, or he continued at school even though he was bullied at school. He could have learned the password to his dormitory door by asking the teacher or other students, but he chose to destroy the wall. When someone invited him to follow Tom, he criticized and insulted them when he refused. He wanted to be an ordinary student, but he wandered around the forbidden forest every day.(G.T)
DarthFalcon
DarthFalconLv1

Are you the author? Why do you care?

VIJETH_R:he did not want to hide any of his powers and he crushed the door because he wanted to get rid of trouble,but yeah I except that the author has made others brainless,typical young masters,but u still can at least give four as characters are not 2d and has good word building and proper grammar,and a consistent mc.
Dekelos
DekelosLv4

never has been spoken wisest words

RaccoonLeague
RaccoonLeagueAuthor

I don't think he's talking specifically about my story. The guy is defending his point based on his taste, and you seem to run out of arguments and resort to asking if he's the author? That's really cowardly. Everyone has their own preferences, my friend. Some people think my MC can hurt people's feelings because he's not respectful, but he has a being inside him that's influencing his behavior—or do you expect him to stay the same with the power of the King of the Dead? And just as there are people who don't like it, there are others who do as well.

DarthFalcon:Are you the author? Why do you care?
DarthFalcon
DarthFalconLv1

Unfortunately, your opinion is ridiculous. As a writer you should be open to criticism. I pointed out the parts of your book that I didn't like. The person who is your fan defended it, which is a very good thing, but your reader doesn't accept where your book is missing and thinks that your book is flawless. That's why I asked him if he was a writer, because it shouldn't be the opinion of a fan of a book, he should also accept the flaws of the book and report them to the author. As a writer you have to learn to look at your criticism objectively, and try to write better, otherwise you will always be a fan fiction writer. I hope you can improve yourself and learn to speak to your readers in a better tone.

RaccoonLeague:I don't think he's talking specifically about my story. The guy is defending his point based on his taste, and you seem to run out of arguments and resort to asking if he's the author? That's really cowardly. Everyone has their own preferences, my friend. Some people think my MC can hurt people's feelings because he's not respectful, but he has a being inside him that's influencing his behavior—or do you expect him to stay the same with the power of the King of the Dead? And just as there are people who don't like it, there are others who do as well.
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