DarthFalcon

Unfortunately, your opinion is ridiculous. As a writer you should be open to criticism. I pointed out the parts of your book that I didn't like. The person who is your fan defended it, which is a very good thing, but your reader doesn't accept where your book is missing and thinks that your book is flawless. That's why I asked him if he was a writer, because it shouldn't be the opinion of a fan of a book, he should also accept the flaws of the book and report them to the author. As a writer you have to learn to look at your criticism objectively, and try to write better, otherwise you will always be a fan fiction writer. I hope you can improve yourself and learn to speak to your readers in a better tone.

his personality is disgusting

He's about to be a hero

Are you the author? Why do you care?

Well the problem is obvious and you can't see this problem

If you want a place where people don't care about you, you need to change the environment you were in before. But he didn't do that, he didn't leave even though he knew there was a dark lord in England, or he continued at school even though he was bullied at school. He could have learned the password to his dormitory door by asking the teacher or other students, but he chose to destroy the wall. When someone invited him to follow Tom, he criticized and insulted them when he refused. He wanted to be an ordinary student, but he wandered around the forbidden forest every day.(G.T)

I don't want to write a long review, I read 5 chapters and found this book very boring and stupid. He acts like someone who hasn't time traveled. He is a foolish Earth lover, such heroes return to Earth at every opportunity and are maidens who sacrifice themselves for him.( G.T.)

I never understood these stupid time travelers' love for the world. They went to a new universe, there are thousands of planets to explore, but they stubbornly go to Earth like fools.

stupid mc