Review Detail of Redzeth in Pokémon Breeder In One Piece!

Im so glad I come back to this trashheap of an app to scout out some gems every now and then. This fanfic is a great concept married with an enthusiastic amateur author that results in a fic full of passion. The only negative is sentence structure holding it back from becoming one of the greats. That being said, someone with great writing skills wouldn’t be writing this but some generic “original” (ptui) harem R18 slop that nobody but poor teenagers want to read so Ill gladly take slightly below good sentence structure with good grammar over what makes me hate most authors on this site. The synposis says it all, that would probably be the end state of this fic and what the author aspires towards, I look forward to the day we get there. 9/10