Review Detail of Zlivikir in Side Character DxD
Review detail
The story has been very good so far I hope the author maintains this same style and please don't ruin the story with a poorly developed harem where the protagonist has a new girlfriend every 8 chapters
Side Character DxD
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chap 4 is a Mess, there is no saving that, it literally skips from the mc starting doing exercice, then immediatly to a visión of someones elses, the back to mc in another complete diferent state like fighting a yokai
Arcanemissile:What do you mean rushed? I would say it's reasonably paced. Maybe in the first few chapters, the author was kind of brief about mc's childhood but it would be bad for the story if he spent 30 chapters narrating Motohama's everyday life before any supernatural element was involved.
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ArcanemissileLv12Arcanemissile
What do you mean rushed? I would say it's reasonably paced. Maybe in the first few chapters, the author was kind of brief about mc's childhood but it would be bad for the story if he spent 30 chapters narrating Motohama's everyday life before any supernatural element was involved.
B6_12nn3:The fic looks very rushed tbh and the author isn't good with writting interactions