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InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodAuthor7mth
2024-03-21 09:05

Shameless 5 star review, read it here or at QQ. :D lets gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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The_Dark_Hydrax
The_Dark_HydraxLv4

Are you actually going to finish this or abandon it at some point like your other novels?

InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodAuthor

I'm planning on finishing this one, and I'm also planning on rewriting my failures. This is just the first step

The_Dark_Hydrax:Are you actually going to finish this or abandon it at some point like your other novels?
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

a few question before reading, does he have acces to ID create or not? Can he still use things like alchemy, blacksmith and other things to create usefull items?

InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodAuthor

No to the ID create and not yet to the production skills.

Ryofu:a few question before reading, does he have acces to ID create or not? Can he still use things like alchemy, blacksmith and other things to create usefull items?
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

A shame, ID create is what make a gamer fanfic interesting by giving the MC a way to grow faster than others. Without it there is no reason to concidere it a "gamer" fanfic, because he is no longer a "gamer" but a simple "system" user.

InterPlanarGod:No to the ID create and not yet to the production skills.
InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodAuthor

Well, the way I see it, he has a need to flare his Mana(That he can't use or have due having the crippled mana pathways drawback) along with the gamer system using its speashulness in order to make an ID so it doesn't make sense to exist if half of the recipe is missing.

Ryofu:A shame, ID create is what make a gamer fanfic interesting by giving the MC a way to grow faster than others. Without it there is no reason to concidere it a "gamer" fanfic, because he is no longer a "gamer" but a simple "system" user.
Ryofu
RyofuLv11

I understand that, it's just that, for me, a "gamer" without the ID create isn't a gamer. In the end he is just a "system" user. Making the interest I had with the story drop heavily.

InterPlanarGod:Well, the way I see it, he has a need to flare his Mana(That he can't use or have due having the crippled mana pathways drawback) along with the gamer system using its speashulness in order to make an ID so it doesn't make sense to exist if half of the recipe is missing.
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Rusty_noddle12
Rusty_noddle12Lv4

the pacing of the story is very fast, too fast even. As you mentioned in the story, the events that Kenichi had days, weeks, and months to prepare for were squeezed into a few days. You have put in the story that he had years to hone his senses when it should have been more of a simile because he's only had days. Drawbacks or Banes, as you put it, we're perfectly fine, didn't have any problem with it, what's up with people and wanting to kill everyone? My best guess as to why the story is currently so fast is because it's still the prologue, and you wanted to get to the meat of the story(Sorry vegans and animal protesters). The progress of his relationship is also very fast, I'm not sure if that's good or bad, but it went from PG13 to R17 in a few chapters. Kinda sad what happened to his Banes, I've only read one fan fiction where the main character didn't kill. Hopefully, it remains a last resort. Powerscaling is probably the biggest reason to me that the story felt fast-paced because in 20 chapters, it went from schoolyard bullies, to city destroyers. Loved the choices in the world hop and direction the story is going. I wish I knew where the powersystems came from, I only recognize 3 of the mentioned since chapter 20something. Characters are developing very well, I'm getting some idea of their current ideals I think, but I'd love if he was just a tad bit more family oriented, though that's just personal preference as someone that believes that family is more important than a lot of things including self preservation. Awesome story, and solidly recommend reading now, now that intro arc is finished and new one is starting. ( What's up with the silver hair people being set up as overpowered, then getting thoroughly manhandled (Sorry feminist) recently? 😅)

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