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2024-04-17 12:19

This is my opinion. quality is definitely here. I gave it 4 stars because i am picky. It flows great to ME it just has some places where there's a missing letter or such. Story is great i like the premise of the mc becoming a robot cybernetic. great weapon choices plus him going for the long game. Definitely check this out i sure am glad i found this and hope the Author keeps it going and gives us a great ending after many many more chapters.

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Chronicle27
Chronicle27Author

I appreciate the honest review, Thank you for your continued support. It's already late where I live, but tomorrow there will be a bonus chapter just because of you. ❤️

BLACKQEAZER
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outher what is the alignment of the MC?? is he the hero that saves every beauty or is he a benefit oriented villain MC?? and honestly I think if you don't add a romance the MC will be more focused on his journey to top and not restrained by mortal desires. also since he became a non-human I don't see the need to add a romance there. it's just my opinion you're welcome if you disagree..

Chronicle27:I appreciate the honest review, Thank you for your continued support. It's already late where I live, but tomorrow there will be a bonus chapter just because of you. ❤️
Chronicle27
Chronicle27Author

To answer your question, he is a benefit oriented anti-hero. I wouldn't necessarily consider him a villain. He may have trust issues and still some trauma from his past life, but he definitely does things to his benefit. To answer the romance part would be spoiling some plots to the story, but let's just say that he is very focused on his goals at the moment. Romance is also there for other reasons but won't be one of the main focuses.

BLACKQEAZER:outher what is the alignment of the MC?? is he the hero that saves every beauty or is he a benefit oriented villain MC?? and honestly I think if you don't add a romance the MC will be more focused on his journey to top and not restrained by mortal desires. also since he became a non-human I don't see the need to add a romance there. it's just my opinion you're welcome if you disagree..
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