This is gonna be good. Though the MC needs some roughing up since he's way goody two shoes and a articulate speaker to be a street hustler. He lack that certain bounce and confidence in his personality that makes the rapper click. So instead of being real he looks like a wannabe. Would still look forward to next chapter though since it's only CH 14 as of now and maybe he'll get character development. Cause as 8 miles once said "There's no such thing as a half-way crook"
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LIKEI get you man, my point is he lack that realness in him to be spitting bars about "9m waiting for you" type of rap. But like I said it's still only 14 chapters so I'm eager to see what your plan for the story is.
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The "Chicago lyrical inspiration" Status would be the reason for such.
Danshaku:I get you man, my point is he lack that realness in him to be spitting bars about "9m waiting for you" type of rap. But like I said it's still only 14 chapters so I'm eager to see what your plan for the story is.image
I know, what I mean is now he just need the realness to back up those freestyle.
AmSincere:The "Chicago lyrical inspiration" Status would be the reason for such.
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