good points of the story MC has uzumaki and uchiha bloodline and is super good at learning jutsus. the grammar quality is not that bad it's pretty good compared to most fan fictions i have read. MC doesn't become a god at super young age like in most self insert fan fictions. unfortunately that's where the good points end cons LOADS AND LOADS of info dumps another review said it but i didn't think it would be think bad while a little bit fleshing out the environment is good info dump is never fun to read. Author forces situations like MC is talking(bragging ?) about how unlocking sharingan requires strong emotions and also talks about the mangekyou sharingan when he shouldn't know about it and he gets observed by another uchiha. those two kids he is talking to didn't even ask him about it he just said it out of nowhere. MC abilities are heavily nerfed a 3 tomoe sharingan which should be able to track even a jounin ninja are just SLIGHTLY better then 1 tomoe sharingan. MC with uzumaki physique + 3 tomoe sharingan + 3~4 years of continues day and night training to hone all his skills lost to a no name hyuga not even mentioned in the canon who is just an year older than MC .Also his chakra reserves are quite small as he is surprised and wish to have reserves equal to a sensory ninja that teaches MC. the author has made MC a supposed genius with broken bloodlines and now he is nerfing him so MC won't be too strong .
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