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Zaddy_7709
Zaddy_7709Lv149mth
2024-08-09 18:17

Warning, mc in this is severly nerfed. SPOILER BELOW Mc unlocks 3 tomoe sharingan at 7, then loses to a random 8 year old hyuga in a taijutsu match. His chakra is "nearing chunin level" while he's a genin, he knows no genjutsu at this point in the story, sharingan has gone from copying ninjutsu to giving a tutorial on how the jutsu works. If you've read the Wind Demon fanfic it feels like the author wanted to go for the same direction but completely failed to understand why Wind Demon worked. The mc there was some random who was talented at wind release and thats all, here the mc has 2 of the most busted bloodlines, and training from a jonin since a young age but still shruggles to be barely above average.

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Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

This review is spot on. The MC has no advantages of either bloodline at all. None of the basically advantages of the Uzumaki or their kekkai genkai. He doesn't have a real sharingan. He's a waste. Worse than Yu Xiaogang. Trained from a young age by some of the best and still can't even beat kids his own age despite the training and two of the most powerful bloodlines in history. Would have been better for him to just stay dead if this was going to be the result. Total waste of a potentially good novel all because author turned a genius into an utter trash

Meef
MeefLv3

I know it's been some time, but I can't seem to find the Wind Demon fic, has it had a change in name?

Zaddy_7709
Zaddy_7709Lv14

naruto the wind calamity. no idea why i said wind demon lmao

Meef:I know it's been some time, but I can't seem to find the Wind Demon fic, has it had a change in name?
Ductor_Storage
Ductor_StorageLv13

It's called Naruto The wind calamity, not demon

Meef:I know it's been some time, but I can't seem to find the Wind Demon fic, has it had a change in name?
VolkBert
VolkBertLv14

It's called wind calamity

Meef:I know it's been some time, but I can't seem to find the Wind Demon fic, has it had a change in name?
Mika_Reesu
Mika_ReesuLv4

Totally agreed! I stopped later but that feeling was even more present!

Zaddy_7709
Zaddy_7709Lv14

Don't know how to edit, but the 'Wind Demon' fanfic I mentioned is called Wind Calamity, no idea why I called it Wind Demon

UrsReader
UrsReaderLv4

Hahaha Yu xiaogang🤣 now that I heard that name it makes more sense

Raptor2244:This review is spot on. The MC has no advantages of either bloodline at all. None of the basically advantages of the Uzumaki or their kekkai genkai. He doesn't have a real sharingan. He's a waste. Worse than Yu Xiaogang. Trained from a young age by some of the best and still can't even beat kids his own age despite the training and two of the most powerful bloodlines in history. Would have been better for him to just stay dead if this was going to be the result. Total waste of a potentially good novel all because author turned a genius into an utter trash
Raptor2244
Raptor2244Lv14

Yeah at least yu xiagang has the excuse that he was born trash. This Mc was born with a diamond spoon in his mouth and is still garbage. No excuse lol

UrsReader:Hahaha Yu xiaogang🤣 now that I heard that name it makes more sense
Osyozy12345
Osyozy12345Lv4

the nerf on the mc at this point is ridiculous I mean what's the point of having a uchiha bloodline if you just cap its growth its plain stupid no EMS no rinnegan nothing author I'll be blunt you ruined the story for me as I'm a huge mega fan of the sharingan

Zaddy_7709
Zaddy_7709Lv14

Real shit bro, I dropped this already since it doesn't seem like the mc will ever be as strong as he logically shoukd be. Like sharingan AND uzamaki chakra? Bro shoukd dogwalk anyone near him in age as long as he puts the bare minimum into training XD

Osyozy12345:the nerf on the mc at this point is ridiculous I mean what's the point of having a uchiha bloodline if you just cap its growth its plain stupid no EMS no rinnegan nothing author I'll be blunt you ruined the story for me as I'm a huge mega fan of the sharingan
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