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MMEStudioLv41yr
2024-04-17 13:48

I like your rewrite it’s very good to be honest I know about the no harem but it will be better if but a romantic sub plot I mean the grind never stops is okay but we need something different in between About his Uzumaki bloodline won’t he awaken kaguia mind eye it’s very powerful ability it’s really bad that the mc doesn’t own last thing if u could make the romantic partner a senju if u are going to create a romantic sub plot

Naruto: Mixed Heritage(Rewrite)

Sidecharacter1
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432 Chs

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Sidecharacter1
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There will be, but it will be in the distant future since the MC will be in his thirties by the time Canon begins. Of course he will have a wife or even a child or two

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MMEStudio
MMEStudioLv4

Brother according to the canon the uzomaki clan are a bit savage and battle hungry like kaguya we don’t see this coming in our MC I hope u can show case this trait in one way or another

Sidecharacter1:There will be, but it will be in the distant future since the MC will be in his thirties by the time Canon begins. Of course he will have a wife or even a child or two
1yr
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