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2024-08-13 06:55

The inserts about how games are made seem unnecessary, alien, out of place, and out of place. And remembering how many threats there are in the world, it's dangerous and stupid. It looks like a simple placeholder. If you throw out this strange insert and the canon of the world, you'll be left with a hero who hangs around like... in an ice hole, sometimes sticking somewhere. (And his plans, of course, always go as they should) The hero's story itself is pathetic, if there is one, of course. What's the conflict, where's the personal plot?

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