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2024-09-16 03:04

I'm honestl disappointed. Not with the story itself, as this is translation and the translation and editing this is a main point. And it kinda starts dropping after few tens of chapters and by chapter 100 it feels almost like it is not worth reading. Plot itself gets less interesting as story progresess so dropping quality of translation/editing just makes it easy to drop. Mabe it gets better later, but I don't have patience to continue reading it now nad trying to find that point that would make it interesting again.

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