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XunKun
XunKunLv46mth
2024-06-07 22:52

after reading half of this, i noticed there were some inconsistency, like isn't the mc supposed to be transmigrated in a game that he plays a lot? how come he doesn't even know half of the events that's been happening? or atleast comment about how much the story has diverged from the original script? also the world building isn't much, sometimes i imagined that this is set on some medieval setting, and sometimes I Imagine it in some modern setting. the writing is fine, and the character designs are fine

In the Academy as Sukuna (Updating in fanfics)

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ImaMelonFarm
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Thanks for the input, also about the game information, I just set it up as he knows what's gonna happen but doesn't 'tell' you, which is also because . Spoiler Alert . . . . . . . . . . . . He loses memory of the game soon. Well, maybe I should've made him more dependent on the knowledge at the start, I'll keep that in mind if I edit the chapters :>

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The writing quality has been improving, though I must warn you that there is a lot of shortening of words. An example..... beacuse to cuz. Updates regularly. You don't have to wait many days. Character design, it's not really brought up that much on what the characters look like. Though, we do get a description for our Mc. The World Background isn't really laid out for you. There are hints, as one of the characters mentions villains. Which leads me to believe the world might be like My Hero Academia. Story development, not much to say here other than it seems our main character might end up going against the world. As a villain. However, he himself isn't inherently evil. Unless you count the fact that he's Sukuna. Looks promising. And for any improvements. I'd think it'd be expanding on the other main characters. I also really like the Mc.... As the strongest Curse, Sukuna, fought the cat, Fraud Gege, he began to open his Nah, I'd win. Gege shrunk back in his fear. Then Sukuna said.... "Your name is now Ge/ge!" Time Freeze! "Ahhh." Gege smiled. "My anti- Sukuna technique I haven't used since Kusakabe. This legendary technique is called.....

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Pretty good Sukuna fanfic PS: I was forced to write a review 😭

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Jaxon235
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You wrote another one so I am forced to give you another five star review... Are you still updating the first one because I half no qualms with it.

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Overall it's a good story, probably the best of sukuna.[img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar][img=recomendar]

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churnjudo
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idk man started reading when this had only like 3 chapters, and I've seen a dramatic increase in writing quality. I've also been reading this longer than I ever expected to, so that's a plus the story's pretty interesting, I almost never expect what happens next and it somehow still makes sense wish there weren't so much fodder characters 🙏

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Like the story so far unsure where the story will take us we shall see

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pretty good oc setting, entertainingly cliche characters and a funny mc ....................................................................................

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IA_Extra13
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to be honest I never really know who is talking right now. The scenery just changes from now to then and suddenly we see out of a different perspective of a person we don't even know. Other than that I love the development if the story and the plot but from ch 17 onwards I just couldn't anymore

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