Review Detail of Toru_Kou in Genshin Impact: Reborn Engineer
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Unehehs_your_eheh:Possibly, but definitely not one of those massive ones you commonly find in fanfics. Carman isn't out to date every female character he meets. I plan to write more organic relationships, ups and downs, possibly a breakup, to keep things more realistic. This is my personal preference as an author, I don't want the characters I write to just disappear into the background whenever new interest pops up. I am putting effort into developing relationships and having too many "Main Cast" members will break that down, any time I introduce a character it will have a reason, unless it's in a filler chapter, got a few of those floating around, but they will have to wait until the story progresses to where Carman is traveling Teyvat.
of course don't worry I really like the start of the story and got hooked at it and now I'm waiting for the next chapter!
Unehehs_your_eheh:Thank you for the review! Though it's more of a diamond in the rough in my opinion, there are plenty of places where I can see need improvement, and probably many more I haven't noticed yet. I hope you continue stopping by when I release a new chapter.
Unehehs_your_eheh:Thank you for the review! Though it's more of a diamond in the rough in my opinion, there are plenty of places where I can see need improvement, and probably many more I haven't noticed yet. I hope you continue stopping by when I release a new chapter.
Possibly, but definitely not one of those massive ones you commonly find in fanfics. Carman isn't out to date every female character he meets. I plan to write more organic relationships, ups and downs, possibly a breakup, to keep things more realistic. This is my personal preference as an author, I don't want the characters I write to just disappear into the background whenever new interest pops up. I am putting effort into developing relationships and having too many "Main Cast" members will break that down, any time I introduce a character it will have a reason, unless it's in a filler chapter, got a few of those floating around, but they will have to wait until the story progresses to where Carman is traveling Teyvat.
AsDarkAsBlack:harem?
There will be many female characters who will play important roles in the story. Ryuzu will be the one that shows up most often though. I currently don't have any plans for romance yet as I've only plotted to the Fontaine Research Institute so far and only have a bare bones outline for the Sumaru Akademiya. Carman will be ages 12 and 16 respectively when he joins those schools. I don't think Carman will end up dating anybody until he reaches 17, maybe even a bit later than that. He is still grappling with accepting his new reality now, I am hoping to write a somewhat more realistic depiction of a person's mental state after being reincarnated. Carman also has the typical mental block of people his physical age being literal children when he (by the time puberty hits) is ~45 years old inside. I have some ideas on who may be a love interest later on, but please be patient. I do not like reading rushed romances, and I believe I'd like to write them even less.
AsDarkAsBlack:Bro just tell if there will be one fl or more than one fl.
Unehehs_your_eheh:There will be many female characters who will play important roles in the story. Ryuzu will be the one that shows up most often though. I currently don't have any plans for romance yet as I've only plotted to the Fontaine Research Institute so far and only have a bare bones outline for the Sumaru Akademiya. Carman will be ages 12 and 16 respectively when he joins those schools. I don't think Carman will end up dating anybody until he reaches 17, maybe even a bit later than that. He is still grappling with accepting his new reality now, I am hoping to write a somewhat more realistic depiction of a person's mental state after being reincarnated. Carman also has the typical mental block of people his physical age being literal children when he (by the time puberty hits) is ~45 years old inside. I have some ideas on who may be a love interest later on, but please be patient. I do not like reading rushed romances, and I believe I'd like to write them even less.