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Orngebeard
OrngebeardAuthor11mth
2024-05-13 01:54

As an author i guess i can only say that I love my own work, and for those on the fence about reading it. I tried to come up with something new, that would combine some of my favorite games, to create an intriguing story that I personally have had more than one dream about happening.

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Harem_Seeker
Harem_SeekerLv14

is this novel have magic and dragon? or maybe mech?

Jackson_0005
Jackson_0005Lv15

Will the chapters be edited?

Orngebeard
OrngebeardAuthor

Sorry for the delayed reply, but yes ultimately I would love to get an editor but have been a bit busy as of late to actually do so. And as for the story I haven't rejected the idea of having monsters and possibly dragons mixed in there but am still teasing with ideas atm. But no mech's in this one, I do have another novel I was just getting started on writing that so probably be a bit longer now before I actually start posting it.

AeonAeon
AeonAeonLv13

Is this harem or no harem

Orngebeard
OrngebeardAuthor

Not planning to have harem, i have like 0 experience with writing romance so if it is to appear it will be with one, maybe two paramours at most.

AeonAeon:Is this harem or no harem
Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv12

To be honest, it is a good novel, not the best but it is good nonetheless if I am going to give it a review it might have 3 1/2 to 4 stars however I鈥檓 not going to give you a review since I couldn鈥檛 enjoy the story for a person like me who usually use the audiobook function of WebNovel since I am listening to any novel while I am working and your novel is an unreadable since you loved to use under score the audiobook function keep repeating under score under score over and over and over again to the degree that your story become more of a nuisance then an enjoyment so I鈥檓 dropping your novel sorry for that and I wish you all the luck 馃崁.

Orngebeard
OrngebeardAuthor

Sorry to hear that If anyone knows how to put a page break in when writing aside from doing the underscores I鈥檇 be happy to replace them to make it more audiobook friendly

Blood_soaked_bar:To be honest, it is a good novel, not the best but it is good nonetheless if I am going to give it a review it might have 3 1/2 to 4 stars however I鈥檓 not going to give you a review since I couldn鈥檛 enjoy the story for a person like me who usually use the audiobook function of WebNovel since I am listening to any novel while I am working and your novel is an unreadable since you loved to use under score the audiobook function keep repeating under score under score over and over and over again to the degree that your story become more of a nuisance then an enjoyment so I鈥檓 dropping your novel sorry for that and I wish you all the luck 馃崁.
Blood_soaked_bar
Blood_soaked_barLv12

It鈥檚 okay to put underscore but don鈥檛 overdo it you can put one and multiple space then another underscore example ( _ _ _ ) instead of this (_____________________) .

Orngebeard:Sorry to hear that If anyone knows how to put a page break in when writing aside from doing the underscores I鈥檇 be happy to replace them to make it more audiobook friendly
Orngebeard
OrngebeardAuthor

Ah ok I鈥檒l see about doing a replacement here to fix that issue on all the chapters and all the new stuff I鈥檓 writing as well

Blood_soaked_bar:It鈥檚 okay to put underscore but don鈥檛 overdo it you can put one and multiple space then another underscore example ( _ _ _ ) instead of this (_____________________) .
King_Of_SpaceTime
King_Of_SpaceTimeLv14

not sure how good it is yet I was browsing the comments and I noticed a Dude 5 Months ago claim that you had 3 alts rate the book and how he's "The ThiRD PerSOn to REaD your book" sorry but when You have 7 Reviews from 8 Months He's review obviously is a joke Anyway from what I'm reading it's either gonna be a massive flop or a Great book seems little room for anywhere in-between

King_Of_SpaceTime
King_Of_SpaceTimeLv14

Holy shit this book is good From the 1st to the last free chapter at the start of volume 4 3 times did I check which chapter I was on Typically I'm doing that every chapter or at least every other so when I go 5 in a blink of an eye without realizing it I know the books God but 51? that was the first time I realized just how much I was enjoying the book 馃榿

Melshan
MelshanLv7

PLEASE, 2 wives.

Orngebeard:Not planning to have harem, i have like 0 experience with writing romance so if it is to appear it will be with one, maybe two paramours at most.
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