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NarvinLv66mth
2024-05-19 18:02

.................................................................................................................................................. At first it was interesting, but then the author spoiled my mood. In short, I don’t recommend reading this. .....................................................................................

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AKASHIIIi
AKASHIIIiLv3

Poor thing, I'm so sorry for you😣

Anos_VoldigoadGod
Anos_VoldigoadGodLv4

then why write a review?

KasiCair
KasiCairLv1

I think in this case, this review is acceptable. I honestly feel the exact same way about this story. The MC is a smart idiot. If you don't know why... then you probably did not realize many of the implications in the story. I will share only one since I don't want to write four page long comment. ... The MC knows his next reincarnation will depend on his karma. Having bad karma could make him reincarnate as a trap in boku no pice or worse. Yet, he still went all gung-ho evil on the world. I don't expect the mc to be a saint but if this doesn't tell you that the MC is insane idiot with less than two digit IQ, then I dunno what to tell you.

Anos_VoldigoadGod:then why write a review?
Pastlives
PastlivesAuthor

I understand what you meant. I ain't that smart, so writing a character smarter than myself is a challenge. There were many times his actions seemed questionable for an intelligent person (he was always meant to be book smart and not the wise person, but even then, the execution wasn't the best, I know that) but for the point you mentioned: [But remembering all that information about Karma points is useless. In most cases, once you pass through the reincarnation centre, the logic of Universal Karma will no longer apply to you. So even if you reincarnate again using some other method, you won't see this place ever again.] This was mentioned in the first chapter. Karma no longer applies to Mc. Even if his karma exceeds his past life, he won’t reincarnate like last time. If he does, it’ll be from his own methods and have nothing to do with karma like the first one.

KasiCair:I think in this case, this review is acceptable. I honestly feel the exact same way about this story. The MC is a smart idiot. If you don't know why... then you probably did not realize many of the implications in the story. I will share only one since I don't want to write four page long comment. ... The MC knows his next reincarnation will depend on his karma. Having bad karma could make him reincarnate as a trap in boku no pice or worse. Yet, he still went all gung-ho evil on the world. I don't expect the mc to be a saint but if this doesn't tell you that the MC is insane idiot with less than two digit IQ, then I dunno what to tell you.
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