I already love it, but I regret a little that he was able to regain his memories since I thought the endearing dynamic between Cynthia and MC would change. Fortunately, the author chose to preserve their twin-like coordination and relation between them doesn't feel forced or 2d, its built upon something. Chapters are currently lacking, however that's something that would be resolved eventually over time if the author doesn't decide to drop this.

my fanart!! xander! although his hair is black I just painted his hair gray causes u can see his hair details and about his eyes. I just don't know so here I go with the colour I love! keep up good work Author! bye bye

Writing quality is 5☆. Too many pokemon fanfiction these days are too serious, too dark, and too complex. This story though is very light hearted and reflects the overall atmosphere of a fun Pokemon adventure. I particularly like the chemistry of the mc and cynthia both not overshadowing but rather compliment each other. The battles are easy to picture though lacking in suspense though understable since its still too early in the story. Overall a good story that I would recommend reading if you want something light and fun pokemon fanfic, oh also if you like cynthia, definitely this story is for you!

i am by no means an expert in this but i have read many, and i mean many fanfics in this app and outside of it, and this fic feels pretty average, not terrible but also not great. The story is fast paced that i think i will forget what happened in just a day, like there's not even like a training stuff just some time skip then bam something evolved, there's also stuff with how their pokemon get caught it feels kinda force, so yeah fast paced. The dialogue also feels robotic sometimes dunno how to explain this it just feels like it to me. So all in all read it if you're just passing time and have nothing better to do . there may have some like fast paced tags in it and people may like counter well achktually me but oh well you win some you lose some.

I just want to know... will this take the same direction as oshi no ko?

This one's good. Too bad its been a month and the author hasn't uploaded another chapter. Hoping this diamond would be polished enough and not get lost in history like most novels I've read before.

is the novel being dropped, it seemed pretty promising too what a shame, well since i enjoyed my time ill give all my 3 stones as a farewell gift (im not actually leaving i just put this in a list).

Love the story till now. Hope it updates soon though. Kudo to the author. . ................................................................................................

Interesting premise I don’t think I’ve seen a Pokémon story where most of the notable characters are young and not in the positions we remember them at, story’s written well and has good pacing info dumps are bite sized and are only used to explain things that have happened or clarify to avoid confusion while helping flesh out the world, character design is good to you can get a pretty going visual of previous gym leaders