Review Detail of byovevald in Vast Sea Visualization

Overall I have good feelings about this fanfic. But its pace... it's an explosive horror. Amazing descriptions and great vocabulary. Long chaps, which is usually good but not in this case. The descriptions are sometimes too thorough and filled with pointless depictions of unimportant details and unimportant characters. That's why the chaps are so long and the story tempo is too slow. Some may like it, some may not. I'm from the second. If the author had shortened some moments and sped up what was happening, boredom wouldn't have killed me. Bye.