The Mc has character development, don’t expect him to be everything you want in the beginning. The Author clearly improves his writing and you can tell he works hard on the plot. I would suggest giving it a chance and seeing how you feel about it. No system and nothing too OP.

shocked this book isn't getting more love, in a sea of shitty Chinese translations this book is an absolute godsend. I think this is possibly the best one piece fanfic I have read on here. Definitely top 5.

This novel... *Chef's Kiss* Simply glorious. Yes, at the beginning u might get the feeling of "Oh the chapter is very verbose, feels like it's too wordy when describing something that feels may not matter as much as it should." But I swear when talking about growth in someone's narrating and storytelling ability... After going through 300+ chapters and thousands of paragraphs with this author, the stuff that he makes now... Ooof... I'll take the word out of the Issho's arc, "it's preternatural". I'm just glad he never stops cooking

The MC doesn't seem like the protagonist; he lacks his own goals and came from another world just to help Doflamingo with his objectives. Why all this idolatry for Doflamingo? The guy just came from another world and has this attachment, which is very strange especially when he feels nothing for his father. His father may be foolish and naive, but at least he never tried to intentionally harm them. However, he knows very well what Doflamingo is capable of, so this idolatry doesn't make sense. It's okay to like him, but any sensible person would be suspicious. Doflamingo is a guy who has no problem killing his own brother if necessary.

This novel is a poem not a story I don't know why the MC is loyal Well, this novel is not my taste in writing, but it is not a pain to my eyes.

it's so fucking good you can't belive IT Just the First 5 chapters and i am hooked pls kee going the writing qualitiy IS very nice easy To understand everything thank s For writing such a good book 👍😁

why isn't there more likes on this fanfic, this is like one of the best one piece fanfic i have ever read, good work author, looking forward for more chaptere, i just want to suggest if you could give mc a second devil fruit, like how there is a theory that black beard has 2 hearts thats why he can have the power of 2 devil fruit, its just the suggestion, loved your fanfixc looking forward for more

After reading this masterpiece an amazingly well done beginning I think my earlier judgement is correct this story is gonna be peak

Reveal spoiler

Our teacher once told our class: "Justice is an impossible concept to achieve. If somebody kills somebody for fun, the only real justice would be undoing it, which is something nobody can." Since then i adopted this viewpoint. Same with freedom. You're never really free, you're just free of something. Words like these are mostly used (in my opinion) to manipulate people. I love your fanfic.