I found the idea of the story interesting, but the way things were played in the chapter seemed strange to me. I don't know if it's because I'm reading this translated, but the lack of clarity hindered my reading a little. But other than that, it seems to be very interesting, I'll let it accumulate more chapters before continuing reading.

kind of sad this story could have been good ,but unfortunately its just a clump of random things put together that make no sens .as for the storyline itself it nonexting atm .

For me this ff takes Annihilation Maker too far. From a nobody that never train or having a mana then suddenly creating Bast, Tom and Jerry etc. Not to mention Mc suddenly able to summon Super Shenron. Sacredgear have limitation, especially in their base form. The idea is pretty good, but maybe the chatgpt just to much nonsense. The story jump from one plot to another without any bridge between the plot, so the ff kinda lack and lost some part of the story. Author need to add something himself so the story can be more acceptable

Literally no words to describe this garbage. Totally not recommended. Others writing style died with his/her imagination. Worst then Chinese Youngmasters..

Jesus Christ this fic is so cringe in so many levels and gods the grammar and the way they describe the characters feels like this was made by a 12 year old. dude grammarly is free.

Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that is a complete garbage written by the chat gpt.

story:2/10 ( no progression at all.) characters development: 5/10. mc stupidity: 10/10 story progress:1.5/10 the story is currently dosent have any direction at all. daily routine mc wakes, baths, cooks, eats, meeting new characters, trying to be funny by irritating us. no progress with the story. if you think I don't like the story it's because of it is slice of life. then you are mistaken. there is a difference between slice of life story and no story at all.

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I read this because the initial concept is good, like there will be many powers that collide with each other, making it an interesting story, and the author provides notes to lower your intelligence, but this is like a random story and a clear system.