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Qwerttipper
QwerttipperLv49mth
2024-04-13 03:57

The fic starts out well with tadano getting the ikemen system. However, a red flag becomes apparent when the system states he will be destroyed for not following its directives. I ignored that flag, hoping the author would write around it. But it becomes a non factor as the transmigrator accepts all and is accepted his fate to become a slave for the "gods." All this was still excusable if the plot continued in an interesting way, but the author rewrites the existing chapters from the beginning part in Komi's pov. this seems like fluff to artificially increase word count. The author doubles down on tadano, becoming the gods puppet by making him guard one of the goddesses relative. even though she is from a rich house and has servants at her becon call. At this point, the author has made me lose interest in this fic. I hope the author improves as a writer and can make a best-selling book irl

Where I am ?

Nashi103
4.4
147 Chs

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Efthee
EftheeLv14

thx for your review. I will take a look but I don't have much hope

7mth
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The_Puffer
The_PufferLv14

This screams chinese...

6mth
1
Xinum_Sensational
Xinum_SensationalLv4

question? you sayTadano became a puppet for the gods, is he able to disobey or is he doing things because he'll be killed if he doesn't?

6mth
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ParadoxMind
ParadoxMindLv13

This stuff is actually not bad. Although the grammar is butchered af. The first thing which should be done about it is, to not switch up 'he /she' and 'his/her' etc. like Its one Google question away to fix this. (I hope you know what i mean)

10mth

Gaming_Deity
Gaming_DeityLv4

I'm definitely biased because I was looking for a komi fic, but I don't care. Keep up the good work, and don't drop

10mth
Loverofthebeans
LoverofthebeansLv14

I would like this fic more if grammar wasn’t so bad even tho I’m used to reading Chinese translation the one thing that is crosses my line is messing up with the pronouns like calling a he a she and a she a he it grinds my gear other than than pretty good story tho i will try to come back in 5 weeks and hope it’s fixed

9mth
JapaOuO
JapaOuOLv4

The story is cool in itself, there are some spelling errors but nothing that really harms the reading.... I think the only point that caught me is the fact that he can get supernatural powers like the Rinnegan.... for me I was able to get supernatural powers like the Rinnegan.... I would prefer it to be much more of a Slice of Life novel, involving several other comedy and romance anime without the fantasy genre... but let's see how this story unfolds

10mth
DiabloRedfox
DiabloRedfoxLv14

it's a pretty good read, I hated the nagisa and tomoya being conscious entities inside him shinomiya was somewhat ok but those 2 were what made the ratings drop for me, although as all the others in the comments said, the she/he and the grammer stuff is butchered, probably no proofreading or English not my native language problem, and other than being a harem with multiple animes it's a SoL with MC having supernatural powers.

7mth
cult
cultLv4

Honest review Yeah, the grammar sometimes can suck badly, like every sentence that I read, has some kind of spelling mistake in it, definitely better in the later chapters. Story is interesting and cool in itself and I like it, characters are enjoyable, but the grammar can kill it sometimes. I've read a ton of MTL's so I don't really care. [8/6/2024]

8mth
Mid_Midas
Mid_MidasLv4

me reading this good story where the author swap the he and she be like....................................................................

5mth
juan_jose_7953
juan_jose_7953Lv2

this is such a masterpiece please do not ever drop this book im loving it and i need more im addicted, this is like my new drug lol this is a dam 10/10 masterpiece.

8mth
Bettersatou
BettersatouLv4

This fan-fic is very good, I recommend it.

8mth
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