The concept of this fanfic is great and engaging. The way percy fits into the world seems natural and is engaging rather than it being just for the name sake. The writing suffers from misspellings almost constantly throughout chapters, this is not a huge problem as you can autocorrect it in your mind but still can be easily improved. The current direction of the story is exciting and really makes the reader feel engaged while reading the chapters, I wish there were more chapters so I could comment more on this but for now the story has a good direction. The characters seem more alive, not just percy but all the classmates and the main cast, they actually act like a bunch of teenagers in a magic school, the humour is what sets these characters apart from others in other fan fics. The world has been fleshed out to some extent so far but nothing too big or too crazy, I hope to see the whole story and it will not just end after Percy graduates.
Liked it!
LIKEPeople may think that the pacing is a bit slow. I don't mind but that's a personal preference.
