It’s hard to give this novel a fair assessment as it is obviously from a non speaking English writer. My criticism is that the author took no pains to seek a proofreader to assist him with this and instead relied on translated words which as we all know, does not give a fair result. A comment about his use of the word retard was used instead of regressed and his explanation was the translation had it as that. I found this novel a little to far fetched, more a wish fantasy if anything, everything just gets handed to him on a silver plate. I felt no connection to the Mc and in fact found him to be tiresome and to childish to take seriously. The novel appeared initially interesting however after trying to follow the story and combined with the terrible sentences/grammar, it died a quick death in my mind. Only advice to give is as mentioned before, proofreading is urgently required and then check again. Just wasn’t worth the time.
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actually, I have, just now, rewritten chap 7- 10, I don't know if is still bad or not, but if you still have some time, and you still have the mood to read it, please read it.
not rewrite actually, just fix some Grammar
is this harem? I hate harem so I need to know
i'm sorry bro.
it's not big, maybe just 3 or 4, he needs it
Thank you for the answer.
lol 😂😂 he really needs it
I dropped at 8. Cant keep reading with such quality. Dont want to drop a bad review so just writing this here.
Although he became a vampire primoginator he doesn't have the abilities of one. may a true vampire form.blood control and domintion,mind control and after he became a vampire he has not problem of controlling his strength in fact it's not even mentioned how much he grow in strength and speed. well till the the part I read which is 30+.
