Xander_Paz

Halley's name was confused with Claire's.

The paragraphs are out of sync, which causes problems when reading or translating with Google Translate.

That doesn't make much sense; you can't learn a martial art just by watching it on TV, and what it does at the bottom of the ocean creates tsunamis.

One question, doesn't he need to eat?

Boots first, then pants?

TFTC

Quality starts to decline if you can't keep up with the publishing schedule; delay publishing and maintain quality. It's better to maintain quality than to lose customers due to poor management.

It's difficult to read using Google Translate.

Perhaps I misread, but I recall that one of the rewards was related to talent for fuinjutsu? I'm not sure if I remember correctly.

I honestly came without expecting anything and I was very surprised; it's one of the best Marvel fanfics I've ever read. The guy doesn't beat around the bush, and the whole story and the suspense of how he completes the mission feels so exciting. My greetings to the chef, excellent work.