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septimus_heap7Lv1411mth
2024-04-22 12:41

The story development is not bad same with the Charakters but the grammar is hard to read with the story switching from „me perspective „ to 3rd person . As well as sentences that repeat themself . You can give this one a try but if you can’t handle the grammar then you should just drop it .

The Revered Magus

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VenerableDio
VenerableDioAuthor

Yes, It is yet another shameless author -_- Since it is my first novel, please be understanding about the quality of writing, I am certain that I have improved as I continue writing especially after the ascension (minor spoiler :] ) Any questions you may have, comment and I’ll do my best to satisfy your queries Hope you enjoy the book, please make reviews so I know what I am doing right and what I can get better at

10mth

Captain_Spoiler
Captain_SpoilerLv13

Honest reviews are here.. [Extreme Spoiler Alert] When you saw the word "betrayal" in the synopsis, don't misunderstand it..The betrayal hardly can be called betrayal as MC in his previous life, he just a person who doesn't get any love or attention from his parents.. But his parent do their responsibility as parents, like giving him home and food.. They just love and dot his little brother more.. I think it kinda normal for most families.. Youngest children always get the most attention and love from their parents while the eldest child always get ignored.. When MC dies, he also dies because of the truck.. It is not because his parents or his little brother kill him.. So, the betrayal in synopsis might bring some misunderstanding.. As MC reincarnated into the new world where magic existence, MC is unlucky as his mother died during his birth.. He stayed with his father, stepmother (2nd wife), and stepbrother (5 years older than him).. He left alone as his father also just ignored him (pretend to hate him). His stepmother and stepbrother are treating him just like an annoying kid, but not to the point that can be called abusive.. As soon as MC has been born, he is already aware that he is reincarnated, and a few moments later, he awakened his golden finger, the system.. Then, time skip, MC is 6 years old.. He started to collect EXP.. Within a month, he gained 11k EXP.. Then, he used his EXP to convert into stat point 11,000 EXP=11 stat points.. Then, time skipped for 4 years, which MC now become 10 years old.. During his 4 years time skip, MC stat point is not changing at all, not even 0.001 stat point.. But he did hoarding the EXP, but only 24,000 EXP.. When MC is 6 years old, he can collect 11k EXP within a month, but for the whole 4 years, he only gained 24k EXP without any increase in his stat?? It is very disappointing.. Then awakening ceremony, he show that he awakened two top-rank Spirit root: Fire and darkness.. (low, medium, high, top, peak).. He goes to Academy to start his study and the Academy Arc.. Then, after joining class on his school day, he takes a mission.. At the mission, he found a hidden cave and got an "opportunity".. As a result, he is in a coma for ANOTHER 5 YEARS.. What is this "opportunity" that makes him lose his 5 years' worth of his time?? That is The Memories of the Great Dragon.. There are no bloodlines or skills or items or treasures or anything.. Just Memories.. There is no improvement in his stat too.. Then, he came back to the Acadeny and pretended that he was kidnapped by others for 5 years.. And now, he fall behind his peers because most of them spend their time improving their rank and skill, training to become strong while he daydream in the "Memories". Then I stop reading.. lol.. I read this novel because of Overpowered Tag.. I even repeatedly go to the main page of this novel to reread synopsis and all tag, as I thought I might misread about this novel.. There are times when the author puts a wrong stat in MC status window.. The author might copy the wrong status, not the latest causing MC attributes for Endurance, and Mana has decreased.. Even though the reader already points out exactly which sentence it is, there are no corrections.. The author probably just ignores his reader.. At chapter 20+, we still don't know about the name of this novel rank for Magus and the rank of Martial Artist.. Mage Apprentice is the usual name to be used by many authors but Mage Initiate?? Shicidan and Hacidan Martial Artist?? What with that rank?? If you want to follow Black Belt grade of Jijutsu, you should start it from Shodan (Black Belt 1st Dan), Nidan (Black Belt 2nd Dan), Sandan (3rd Dan), Yondan (4th Dan), Godan (5th Dan), Rukodan (6th Dan), Shicidan (7th Dan), Hacidan (8th Dan), Kyudan (9th Dan), Jyudan (10th Dan).. But you start with Shichidan..... I guess this is not my forte.. Anyways, good luck to the author.. I feel bad that I only last for 20+ chapters. If only the beginning of the story is more interesting, I might keep reading it.. I give it 3 stars as I feel that this novel is not that bad but also not that good, kinda average..

8mth
Apathetic_Reviewer
Apathetic_ReviewerLv2

Finally back, I thought you dropped the novel, came back better in every aspect, keep it going!! now gotta fill with random words, good novel tho ;)

11mth
Shdel
ShdelLv15

Not a big reviewer but liked the book and have kept reading it.

10mth
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