septimus_heap7

Still dont unterstand why you dropped this Fanficton. You said because what J.K posted on Trans and gender identity and how bad that all was . Didn't she just say that that a biological man can never be a biological woman . (Biological not mentaly. Free will and all that)

His Twin brother is 17 . How can he be 15 ?

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Didin`t he only hunt because he was hungry ?

Hatred from germany! . . . . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

I like reading it . Its a fresh breath of air compare to other novel were the Protagonist is crippled,banished from his family etc. The grammer is flawless(pretty sure chatgpt). The pacing is decent but the chapter get needlessly streched with platitudes(probaly chat gpt ). If the author of this novel happens to read this and didn’t use ChatGPT, feel free to say so and I’ll change my review. Either way the idea behind the story is good and most people struggle to even write two chapters so using ChatGPT isn’t a bad thing at all. (I would too). Build youre own opinion and dont get scared away because of my review.

Really enjoying this one so far. The mix of Naruto-style powers with cultivation actually works way better than I expected. If you're into both Naruto and cultivation stories, I’d definitely recommend giving it a shot.

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