Review Detail of Zekril in MHA: Izuku Reloaded
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It's good, but it is written by following a formula. It's too predictable that it gets boring the far you read it. Why don't you give some spice on it, like give your MC some attitude or stop describing the character in depth but just the broad idea on who he is. It's just a suggestion. I hope you will not get upset with what I said. Like I said It's good but needs just some spice on it.
MHA: Izuku Reloaded
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the MC has too much positive energy. I mean, he always see the bright side of people around him. Like how he see it's not almighty fault or how he wants to see his bakugo relationship moving forward. He is too "optimistic" if I'm not wrong on my understanding. Why don't you highlight a sin trait on him to make him more human. Like showing greed for power, lust for woman, envy for the strong, or even just being slothful just to show that he is not just a written character that followed a script written. I hope you see this.
TenseiNovels:I’ll take it into suggestion. Can you give me an example of what it is you’re looking for?
Zekril:the MC has too much positive energy. I mean, he always see the bright side of people around him. Like how he see it's not almighty fault or how he wants to see his bakugo relationship moving forward. He is too "optimistic" if I'm not wrong on my understanding. Why don't you highlight a sin trait on him to make him more human. Like showing greed for power, lust for woman, envy for the strong, or even just being slothful just to show that he is not just a written character that followed a script written. I hope you see this.