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AmannensenLv410mth
2024-04-12 09:20

please don't drop it in the middle my friend

Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger

stromerthaha
4.5
136 Chs

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ZaelumLv5

Is a pretty good fanfic but still lacks quality on the translation, still that can be fixed, so translator do your best. Also to help you a little, use software to help you translate better, grammarly, chatgpt, etc. All of those are free and make your translation slightly more easy. Still, good job!

11mth
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multiverses_sageLv4

whats the raw name[img=update][img=update]

11mth
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rbpLv2

read up to 30 chaps. and still writing has no improvement yet my brain had enough🤯💀💀💀,,like what is this - ("but now ash can earn his own money and travel without having to work so hard for his mother delia" totally different from what you wish to express) and a lot more of mistakes like this or even worse in every chapter, i repeat every chapter that reader's has to wrack their brains to make sense of what you want to express. so rather than releasing multiples off chap. in a short span of time, you could just take your time to write a better quality (just my suggestion though as it's up to you) WRITING QUALITY- 1⭐ UPDATING STABILITY- 5⭐ STORY DEVELOPMENT-4⭐ CHARACTER DESIGN- 4⭐ WORLD BACKGROUND- 5⭐ 4⭐ for the story development as i didn't reach the depth to judge your story.

10mth
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daniel_veraLv1

Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More

11mth
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Arjun_ShastryLv3

as its a fanfic thats just released , it pretty good , dont know how update stability will be . still looking forwward for more.

11mth
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AsdrendorLv1

Mr. author, you forgot about Sonia in galar, it is great material for waifu.................................... ................................................ . .................................................. .................................................. ... .................................................. .................................................. ...........................

10mth
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Felipe_GirelliLv2

Reveal spoiler

11mth
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GoldenZega606Lv1

It is a pretty good Pokémon fanfic and the story evolves every moment, especially the love for how it develops, exists and succeeds, good history

11mth
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DaviddanijoLv4

Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)

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Marcus_HembreeLv4

I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.

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