Is a pretty good fanfic but still lacks quality on the translation, still that can be fixed, so translator do your best. Also to help you a little, use software to help you translate better, grammarly, chatgpt, etc. All of those are free and make your translation slightly more easy. Still, good job!

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Excellent original story, if it can no longer be considered a translation, try reading the Chinese MTL and it is garbage. Keep it up. More

as its a fanfic thats just released , it pretty good , dont know how update stability will be . still looking forwward for more.

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It is a pretty good Pokémon fanfic and the story evolves every moment, especially the love for how it develops, exists and succeeds, good history

Everything is good about your story except for all the bad grammar and writing errors that plague every single chapter (if possible can you please go back and fix them so this story can become better to read)

I enjoy the pacing and fluid interactions with the characters. I do like that the author does pay attention to what the reader opinion, but still has his own clear vision. I will offer ideas in some of my comments, feel free to use them if I can inspire your creative flow for putting out more chapters. I hope to see where you decide to take your story and bring it to life. I appreciate the time and effort you spent on it. P.S. I'll be using this gif for any future ideas I'll will offer.

this novel started as a translation but the author made great changes to the story and made it so better than the original novel. keep it up and give more updates.