It's a well written story so far. The grammar is good, and I haven't noticed any spelling errors. Character development is currently on going, both the MC and potential FL are likable and three-dimensional. There is no cardboard cutout FL as most stories have. There is believable humor, conflict, and interaction between the MC and FL. There's only 3 chapters thus far, I've nothing else to comment. Added to library.
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