Review Detail of greatcheesemaster in The Hollow Hive God

Item: The Hollow Hive God
Rating: 5

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greatcheesemasterLv43mthgreatcheesemaster

Nice story hope you keep writing and I wish all the luck on your writing journey but I do hope u improve ur grammar a bit you convey the message that is required but tends to get ur grammar mixed up so if you fix that you will be golden

The Hollow Hive God

ERROR16291

Liked it!

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ERROR16291AuthorERROR16291

Thanks for the insight. I have noticed my grammar has been "funky" and have tried to fix it and didn't really know if I fixed it or not. So thank you for telling me this

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