Arnab_PandayLv210mth

2024-03-14 14:14

I personally like this one. The author's writing quality is good. It's still the start so I can say anything about the future but if he continues to write like this and improve then I think this fanfic will be a hit. I think the author should write more words in a chapter. Like 2.5-3k words. Also, you should focus on other characters too. Tell us from their perspective. One more thing, you shouldn't make the MC overpowered from the get go. Being powerful is alright but being overpowered takes the fun away. Make it so that the MC take more time learning his past life skills.

OVERPOWERED SWORD- A DIFFERENT LEON

Novel_Lover459

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5 Chs