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Just_Nota
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Ok got as far as chapter 23 before giving up. 0 world building, 0 character development, Writing quality is mid. Spoiler: so far guy heals an injured fox that ends up being a fragment of goddess of luck who rando shows up gives guy high luck stat, and a pet fox has all kinds of unexplained abilities, we can infer the mc is a knight maybe a stealth type who knows as author doesn't really build the character and goes all over the place with the character and the pet with little to no explanations or even basic stats or development of the game character or the out of game character. MC sells unknown loot of epic quality and makes lump sums of money. I think the author needs to actually try playing an MMO or read more of the genre before writing a book in the category.

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I'll try to improve it in the future