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Just_Nota

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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota8d
    Posted

    Ok got as far as chapter 23 before giving up. 0 world building, 0 character development, Writing quality is mid. Spoiler: so far guy heals an injured fox that ends up being a fragment of goddess of luck who rando shows up gives guy high luck stat, and a pet fox has all kinds of unexplained abilities, we can infer the mc is a knight maybe a stealth type who knows as author doesn't really build the character and goes all over the place with the character and the pet with little to no explanations or even basic stats or development of the game character or the out of game character. MC sells unknown loot of epic quality and makes lump sums of money. I think the author needs to actually try playing an MMO or read more of the genre before writing a book in the category.

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    Divine Luck
    Games · That_Cultivator
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota8d
    Commented

    yeah I'm kinda finding it annoying as luck is all about the drops.

    Ch 10 Grinding All Day
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    Divine Luck
    Games · That_Cultivator
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota9d
    Commented

    littering (things) not loitering (people)

    As a result, it was free of crime, so free that you could drop a heaven and earth treasure in the middle of the street and expect to find it in the lost and found department. Though you'll be charged with loitering. 
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    I Became a Wizard with a Quest Book!
    Fantasy · DurcalAka
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota1mth
    Posted

    So far, a well edited book with a good flow in writing style not the low quality system books that can normally be found on here. no rating on update stability as I only recently started the book.

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    Apocalypse Buyback System
    Fantasy · BS_Entertainment
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota1mth
    Replied to Wolly159

    okay, I tried to read this but seriously what is with having a space ship but everyone jumps out of the ship to do space combat melee style with no explanation.

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    Galaxy Overlord: I Inherited the Interstellar System.
    Sci-fi · Bobbayee
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota1mth
    Commented

    ok again translator.. The word is antics not antiques.. one is a behavior description one is a type of thing..

    Ch 76 A Newfound Drive
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    My Regressor System
    Urban · Tehn
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota2mth
    Commented

    Book isn't bad, but the editor should go back and fix genders and some terms are completely wrong and it gets irritating when reading. summons not summoners when referring to the creatures that a summoner calls.

    Ch 21 Complete All Quests
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    Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)
    Games · Fallen_Angelss
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota3mth
    Commented

    one thing I don't understand is why the dumb mc doesn't use his appraisal on questionable people..

    Ch 159 Chapter159-Killing a Civilian?
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    Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over
    Urban · Red_Skin_Duck
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota4mth
    Posted

    Ok first the story had a good enough flow then 10 or so chapters in it just made 0 sense like it was bouncing around 30 or more chapters at random in the story. gave up not worth starting.

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    Global Online Game: Ten Thousand Times Reward at the Beginning!
    Sci-fi · Death By Spear
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota5mth
    Commented

    anyone else notice the not contacting the barbarians yet they were marching out with the barbarians and the Five tribes .

    Ch 80 Chapter80-Five Hundred Elites
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    Original Realm: I Can Gain Ultimate Intelligence by Leveling Up
    Fantasy · Steamed_Soup_Dumpl
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota6mth
    Replied to Ronan_McCrossan

    yep, I was about to post the same.

    “S-Sounds fun,” Ethan replied. “He didn’t take the Potion Making Class because he wasn’t that good at memorizing things. Also, he didn’t have the patience to mix things together to try to create potions.
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    Strongest Warlock - Wizard World Irregular
    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota2yr
    Commented

    another duplicate ch

    Ch 155 Updated Later
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    Modern Weapon Summoning System
    Fantasy · MaxwellKHA
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota2yr
    Commented

    2 old chapters in a row.. with publisher..

    Ch 153 Will Be Updated
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    Modern Weapon Summoning System
    Fantasy · MaxwellKHA
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota2yr
    Commented

    another repeated out of sequence chapter

    Ch 142 Updated Later
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    Modern Weapon Summoning System
    Fantasy · MaxwellKHA
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  • Just_Nota
    Just_Nota2yr
    Commented

    multiple duplicate chapters.. please correct it's annoying and rips off people paying to unlock chapters.

    Ch 138 Moving [Changed Later}
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    Modern Weapon Summoning System
    Fantasy · MaxwellKHA
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