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Shadow_XL
Shadow_XLLv44mth
2024-06-28 23:08

It's not bad but the biggest problem it has is its pacing. It is way too slow and basically nothing happens for the first 4 or 5 chapters.

DXD: Inconvenient

MyNameNotIsJohn
4.6
38 Chs

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MyNameNotIsJohn
MyNameNotIsJohnAuthor

Author here to give five stars because obviously it's my work so don't expect me to be 100% sincere as I see no reason to be haha, anyway that's it👍

6mth

Holy_Gull_1843
Holy_Gull_1843Lv1

Its a bad fic, and the mayority of 5-stars reviews is the same bot guy, it looks like and alt account of the author ngl---------------------

4mth
Daoist4MxvaV
Daoist4MxvaVLv13

i like your story and i like the mc so far but it seems like u wrote the kind of mc that will get boring eventually i look to see how u keep the mc interesting , i also hope u make the harem unique , i tired of author just copy and pasting issei harem i like more variety . the only thing thankfully there isn't any character bashing , i cant take the fanfic author seriously if they decide to character bash.the only thing i I Don't like is how u treated issei character pls this didn't affect my review , i just dont like how u disregarded all of issei other character traits and just boiled his personality down to that of only being pervert and i like issei character and appreciate what the original author of dxd was trying to do

5mth
Miki_Marlo75
Miki_Marlo75Lv4

I'm liking the development of the story, it doesn't go very fast, the MC takes his time without rushing How the plot is going so far is excellent. It remains to be seen how it continues to develop.

5mth
Jaywalker
JaywalkerLv4

keep it up loving this fic so far 👌 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

5mth
Imaginary_Guy
Imaginary_GuyLv4

This is the best DXD fanfiction I have ever read, and that's crazy because theirs currently only around 30 chapters, please keep going author, and please never drop this series as it might be my last hope of ever reading a good DXD fanfiction in my whole life.

20d
Discarded
DiscardedLv4

cool premise and plot but writing quality is really bad. you can spot here and there hownamateurish the writing is. dxd fics quality is always bad tho so this fic still one of the better one among it.

1mth
Darkiling
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Imaginary_Guy
Imaginary_GuyLv4

this is the best dxd fanfic I've ever seen, and it currently (9/18/2024) only has 15 chapters.

2mth
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