Author here to give five stars because obviously it's my work so don't expect me to be 100% sincere as I see no reason to be haha, anyway that's it👍

Its a bad fic, and the mayority of 5-stars reviews is the same bot guy, it looks like and alt account of the author ngl---------------------

It's not bad but the biggest problem it has is its pacing. It is way too slow and basically nothing happens for the first 4 or 5 chapters.

i like your story and i like the mc so far but it seems like u wrote the kind of mc that will get boring eventually i look to see how u keep the mc interesting , i also hope u make the harem unique , i tired of author just copy and pasting issei harem i like more variety . the only thing thankfully there isn't any character bashing , i cant take the fanfic author seriously if they decide to character bash.the only thing i I Don't like is how u treated issei character pls this didn't affect my review , i just dont like how u disregarded all of issei other character traits and just boiled his personality down to that of only being pervert and i like issei character and appreciate what the original author of dxd was trying to do

I'm liking the development of the story, it doesn't go very fast, the MC takes his time without rushing How the plot is going so far is excellent. It remains to be seen how it continues to develop.

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The Novel is good but is too slow pacing ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

To start with the positives, this is extremely well written and has a good flow to it. It is very slow paced but it keeps moving along and is very enjoyable. The main negative to me is the MC, he just seems really underwhelming. He is a decent character and is well written but he doesn't feel like a MC for a DxD setting. He would be far better in something like Naruto, Marvel, Harry Potter, or DBZ. He just doesn't seem to belong to the setting despite being a decent character.

This is the best DXD fanfiction I have ever read, and that's crazy because theirs currently only around 30 chapters, please keep going author, and please never drop this series as it might be my last hope of ever reading a good DXD fanfiction in my whole life.

cool premise and plot but writing quality is really bad. you can spot here and there hownamateurish the writing is. dxd fics quality is always bad tho so this fic still one of the better one among it.