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Review Detail of Sir_Squirrle in Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

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Sir_Squirrle
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how the heck does this have such a high rating? i mean yeah the writing quality is pretty decent, and the story has potential, but literally just in the first chapter alone there were numerous plot holes and giant leaps in logic, it's like the author was just too lazy to fact-check his fic with avatar source material and wrote the entire base of the plot line on a complete whim with no sound reasoning behind it.

Avatar Legend Of Korra: Two At Once

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BrazillianFox
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Finally someone sane,and seriously, the lack of investigation of the story by the author literally makes me skip many paragraphs