Mid It's not complete trash, but the writing style needs to be refined. I can definitely see this getting traction but I don't like how hollow the story feels. Plus it doesn't feel interesting to read 🤷🏽♂️ like he's an avatar, big whoop, although it had a nice backstory though. I would say. It's more a 3.9 - 4.2. aka amateur writing.
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