Review Detail of Kabuk5 in Rebirth In the 1970s

Grammatically, this story is a mess, in the middle of the same paragraph there's a change between subjects, when conversations are happening, you have no idea who's speaking (in chapter 4 his mom told him that in the 2000s people would be less religious, or at least it looked like that because there was no separation between the conversation and his thoughts), the character also behaves so far as if wisdom is his dump stat. If you research a world's culture, you MUST research its religion, specially if you want to write about sensitive subjects! Not enough time for character development or world background, so giving it three stars at the moment and will come back in a few months and address this review.