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GoodorbadLv411mth
2024-05-29 02:09

So the novel is good but I feel that this is Ai I did see that the author said that he writes it himself but i just don’t see it I feel that he got it from a Ai but edited himself which brings that idea but the thought of this novel is good the only problem it has it that when he gets or do something it makes a detail explanation about what is going to happen in the future which makes me not like this novel because it seems that it’s Ai the author should readed his novel vs other to get a better idea of what is missing and what the problem is good idea but bad writing it good but that to some extent.

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Alexcj
AlexcjAuthor

I see how you feel, once again the story is written myself. Also thanks for your review

Goodorbad
GoodorbadLv4

Yes I can see that but it just feel like that I hope it get better in the future but for right not that how I feel for this novel but you have a great idea for the novel

Alexcj:I see how you feel, once again the story is written myself. Also thanks for your review
Alexcj
AlexcjAuthor

As you dive deeper the writing becomes more balanced, I have been working on that.

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