Here's a shameless author giving five stars to their mediocre work. When it comes to writing quality, truth be told, my vocabulary is pretty average, I don't even speak English well despite studying languages, so there you go. I do what I can, and I like to encourage those who read my story to help me improve. As for update stability, well, I won't lie, I'm quite lazy, and if I see that university demands more attention, then I'll just want to rest and procrastinate all day. If you like the story, give it plenty of support, so I'll be less tempted not to upload chapters. The story's development is slow; I hate it when stories are so fast-paced that it feels like a friend is telling you something funny. I prefer things to take their time, so I can see what each character has to offer me. In character design, I won't lie, I'd like to improve on that. Sometimes I feel like they're all too flat, so I like to imagine subplots that I'll later write to add more depth, although in the early chapters of my stories, you'll always see that everyone is quite reducible to a concept. World design... It's DxD, so it's already pretty good on its own; that's something from the original author, not mine. As a final note, I like edgy protagonists and all, but I also like them to be human, not seeming like a mere emotionless machine throughout the novel. So expect that here, even if the MC isn't the type to express themselves much, it doesn't mean they don't think about what they want, etc. If you're looking for a lot of action, let me tell you, creating fights isn't my strong suit. And if you like everyone praising the protagonist as the strongest thing in the whole world, so do I, although I'll try not to exaggerate with that, heh.

The main character is a slave of the system, I think in these words you have understood the main characteristics of the main character. 50% of the chapters are occupied by useless system messages, and the rest is reduced to describing actions and very little of the real plot. Pros: the main character is not reborn with a formed mindset, and there is a chance after hitting the iron plate that he will make sense of himself and his existence, but judging by the nature of writing this will not happen.

Shameless 1 star for the shameless author who gives himself a perfect review

Start was pretty decent but quickly went downhill out of the current 16 chaoters 3 of them could be filled solely with the nonsense the mc thinks plus author adds in 5 ocs in a world like dxd where there are already plenty of characters to choose from

I found the protagonist's personality very pleasant, he is smart and developing, he makes mistakes and learns from them, something I didn't like was the evaluation magic, it was not given by the system to reveal so much information, and I think it should Take away the HP system, this doesn't work in real life unless he gets stabbed in the head he can have 100000 HP and he dies instantly. (there may be some errors because it was on Google Translate)

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bro don't read this the mc's idiotby the way this is weak to strong

I've read most of the top-rated fanfics around here, and honestly, this one has a lot of potential. The MC doesn't stand out for his interactions with other characters, but his internal monologues and questions have a solid human basis that makes you truly understand his concerns. Honestly, he seems like an ordinary person who just wants everyone around him to be okay, and I appreciate that because there are already enough fanfics with antiheroes in the DxD world. The system is pretty well designed in some aspects; for example, there are no levels or silly missions that give you power indiscriminately. At least we're constantly told that the MC strives to improve his skills, although it must be admitted that the system is quite OP, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. In the synopsis, the author says that the protagonist is a Gary Stu, so at least he warns in advance, although so far he hasn't done anything to call him a "Gary Stu," it's more than clear that it's only a matter of time. In summary, it's a pretty interesting story that at least doesn't just focus on the obscene aspects of DxD and delves deeper into things that are more interesting. At least in my opinion.

I am using a translator First of all I really like your story and the rapid growth of the MC's power and how you write the way that his power increases rapidly but please make the MC investigate well the things that are related to the supernatural and also don't make it late a lot in making him realize that he is the only person with a system and also thank you very much for making the mc's personality incompatible with the fact of having to join a faction. I just hope that the mc remains independent and if he works for a faction be something like a mercenary please don't make the mc join a faction for the sister or something like that I beg you.