Review Detail of Gabichu_Yeah in Minecraft , Marvel and Me, Herobrine?
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You can read at your own risk, the author decided to clarify the plot of the fanfic in the middle and not at the beginning so here I leave you what you will find in this fanfic, It's definitely not my cup of tea nor will it ever be, I hate when there are stories where the author seal the memories of the MC, I think it is a basic and lazy resource on the part of the author. Additionally, the story has horrible grammar and story structure, this story urgently needs a rewrite and reorganization of the events and how they are presented, it's disastrous.
Minecraft , Marvel and Me, Herobrine?
Fav_is_Romance
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jinmorifan_2:add harem so no harem sect gets triggered and they make more reviews increasing books popularity
I already made it clear, in addition to not liking the plot, the story is poorly presented, the scenes are strange as they do not give the full context of the situation and what is happening around the scene (I'm not talking about a particular scene, I'm talking about almost everything I read up to the chapter I took a screenshot of), It is as if you had a book where you write down all the ideas that occur to you and then present them one after the other without stopping to slowly and clearly explain the situation, everything is very spontaneous, you should give more time to the plot and not rush the story, the reader needs to breathe and not receive so much stimulation because you only make the reader feel rejection, at least that's how it is in my reading experience, not slow, at a normal rhythm, slow when it has to be slow and fast when it has to be fast.
Fav_is_Romance:I actually know sealing part is wrong but I have given justification and for grammar part I think I already cleared in synopsis. but I don't know what you are thinking any way
Gabichu_Yeah:I already made it clear, in addition to not liking the plot, the story is poorly presented, the scenes are strange as they do not give the full context of the situation and what is happening around the scene (I'm not talking about a particular scene, I'm talking about almost everything I read up to the chapter I took a screenshot of), It is as if you had a book where you write down all the ideas that occur to you and then present them one after the other without stopping to slowly and clearly explain the situation, everything is very spontaneous, you should give more time to the plot and not rush the story, the reader needs to breathe and not receive so much stimulation because you only make the reader feel rejection, at least that's how it is in my reading experience, not slow, at a normal rhythm, slow when it has to be slow and fast when it has to be fast.
Fav_is_Romance:Well I will say I have no prior experience but I will try to improve
Omni404_Sans:remove harem 2 times easier to write without too many characters speaking all the time
jinmorifan_2:add harem so no harem sect gets triggered and they make more reviews increasing books popularity
Dude, no-harem sect are like vegans; they like to force their opinion down your throat. As for the 1 star reviews the author can simply just delete them and he can limit the harem to only 3 or 4 to not make it too difficult for himself....
Omni404_Sans:a bunch of 1 star reviews and ruin the book