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Sai_sukeAuthor1yr
2024-03-22 16:46

Author review here, moreover a logline: Starting with the first 4-6 chapters, we lay the groundwork, introducing our main character and why he end up with AI, and the reason for entering into the underworld. Following this setup, expect plenty of action and story within this mafia world. Just to be clear, there won't be any romance or harem elements in this novel. Instead, you'll find a story packed with excitement, action, and a touch of thriller. I'm not a pro writer, so there might be mistakes. Feel free to point them out or share any suggestions you have. Your support, even with small actions like commenting on chapters, means a lot to this newbie author. Thank you.

My Life with AI in Mafia

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Asipi_Abhishek
Asipi_AbhishekLv1

Your book was a delightful read. The way you developed the characters and the story was brilliant. I'm eagerly waiting for more of your wonderful work in the future.

10mth

ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

hey I read the story and it is really good and interesting. And author I have a suggestion if you can do it. The suggestion is that can you add brackets for AI like when AI talks can you add brackets like [Add like this ] so it will make it more appealing

10mth
ORIGINofALL
ORIGINofALLLv4

well I was just browsing and find this master piece. Story is interesting and well story writing is also good. Well hope author will try to keep the story as interesting as it is.

10mth
Gita_Akashpu
Gita_AkashpuLv2

The book is interesting to read. It seemed to be different concept than other books I read. Let's see how it will be in future

1yr
Devansh_Phatak
Devansh_PhatakLv4

story premise is good but stop using ai to write the novel , it gets irritating to read

9mth
Smash_Cricket
Smash_CricketLv1

Fantastic job on your book! It was well-written and enjoyable. Keep up the good work—you're a talented author! But you need a lot of improvement in certain sections. However keep going.....

9mth
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