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2024-05-09 11:46

The title seemed very Japanese (bad) to me in terms of "this one wants to be informative" So honestly I read it out of inertia due to the central work of the car "... Card Apprentice", so I think it will be difficult for you to attract public. But it is certainly an engaging story and the author generally knows how to handle good lore and power systems. Something that I think could attract an audience would be to change the word toy on the final cover and that screen does not match. Additionally, I have always wondered if the author plans to have a Discord since, for better and worse, this interaction at least helps readers to be attentive to updates and even more so when they do not have fixed updates like currently.

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