Review Detail of witto in The Extra Wants Control

Ok here’s the thing. I usually only review authors who put in effort and it feels like this author does. So I’ll give a spoiler free review. Writing: too pretentious for my liking. Too many monologues and explaining actions instead of showing actions. However, the language used is great. The dialogues is equally pretentious. But if you like this kind of writing, hey I can’t blame you. I like something that give how the character feels, showing stuffs. I guess it’s the dialogues that really put me off here. But I’ll continue reading because it feels like the author put in effort. Story: it’s alright. Decent so far.