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witto17hCommentedCh 175 My Plan- witto1dCommentedCh 174 Saving Guan
- witto4dCommentedCh 171 Requesting Help
- witto9dPosted
Ok here’s the thing. I usually only review authors who put in effort and it feels like this author does. So I’ll give a spoiler free review. Writing: too pretentious for my liking. Too many monologues and explaining actions instead of showing actions. However, the language used is great. The dialogues is equally pretentious. But if you like this kind of writing, hey I can’t blame you. I like something that give how the character feels, showing stuffs. I guess it’s the dialogues that really put me off here. But I’ll continue reading because it feels like the author put in effort. Story: it’s alright. Decent so far.
- witto12dReplied to Daoist_shini
It’s call. I think it’s plausible. Avoid trouble but be resolute and angry. Anger can make people very resolute
Under these circumstances, Su Yu spent another year in the medicine garden. - witto14dCommented
Author be like. I make mc too OP so I need him to chill out and be stupid
Most importantly, he had even given that to Edward. Now, he had nothing on him except the simple tunic and the pants that he was wearing. - witto14dCommented
Reminds me of GOT (both when it’s good and bad), always have wine
"How about from the beginning? And perhaps with a cup of wine?" Wuyi suggested, trying to lighten the mood, though the others looked too serious. - witto14dCommented
What does this mean, announced in his accent. Does he usually speak other accent hahaha.
They heard men grumbling, and then Xingjian, Yun Ming's attendant, announced in his accent, "All clear, my lords." - witto17dCommented
Reminds me of the new god of war haha
"Come on, boy. We have no time." - witto18dCommentedCh 157 Flame Pillars
- witto19dPosted
Quite frankly, this should’ve been a full 5 if not because of certain chapters in between the arc that the writing quality slipped and the story suddenly lacks detail but I think the author meant it as a time skip moment but it just felt more awkward if anything. Basically it could’ve been done better. If you like cultivation, read it. It’s good.
- witto20dCommented
Sublime naming
A Child That Is Not Embraced by the Village Will Burn It Down to Feel Its Warmth - witto20dCommented
Man this line goes hard.
So, Congming decided to console himself with the thought that he did not mistreat the boy, or the consequences might have been more dire. Still, he had lingering regret, as the boy had said, "He was but not wise enough." - witto20dCommented
Honestly, that’s probably the hardest part. Not knowing what you really want to know.
Wuyi contrived to be in Wangzhe's room, in hiding, when the attendant arrived. From the way the girl slipped in, he was convinced this was not her first mission. She placed a tiny bamboo slip and a flower bud on Wangzhe's pillow, then left and slipped out of the room. Soon, both items were taken away by Wuyi from Wangzhe's room and concealed under his own pillow. He thought the most difficult part of the task was refraining from opening the slip. He turned the slip and flower over to Chao late that night. - witto20dReplied to Thor
Not really. It’s acceptance. It’s not political. It’s just saying… well someone has to do it, fate just say it has to be me. There are things you are powerless to change in your life. Mostly philosophy.
Boluo paused for a long moment, considering his response. "I don't suppose it's any man's fault that he's born..." He sighed, and the words seemed to come more reluctantly. "And there's certainly no way a babe can make itself not a bastard. It's my karma that I had to take on your burden." - witto20dReplied to Deippy_Deippy
Tell them there’s oil. Oh wait, wrong person.
What Boluo said about fear was true; the Patriarch was worried about the future. That's why he decided to take better care of Wuyi, so Wuyi would be indebted to him. He understood properly what the patriarch wanted. If the Yuanjing clan doesn't claim him, the patriarch will use Wuyi as his henchman; a potent Yuanjing bloodline handyman would be a very powerful resource. If Yuanjing comes to claim him, he will owe a debt to the patriarch. It was a win-win for him, investing in some food and education for Wuyi. - witto5mthReplied to TsuraoCh 156 Chapter 35.3 - Short Break
- witto5mthCommented
Right under our noses, authorrrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
"To think they were right in front of our noses."