Item: MAHABHARAT: FREEDOM FROM NIYATI!
Rating: 4.8
Author: Ignatious_Peter_0099

Ignatious_Peter_0099Lv136mth

2024-10-27 08:15

This book is simply a treasure trove.When I read this book for the first time I was thrilled to find a story on Karna like this here.Instead of the normal fan fictions you get to read on Wattpad where Karna is either righteous or a person who transmigrated as Karna,this book tells us about how Karna could have lived a better life if given another chance.In this story our mc is not self righteous or pure evil.He is a man who accepts his mistakes and is trying to live a worthwhile life while cherishing those he cares for. Author, keep up the good work.Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.

MAHABHARAT: FREEDOM FROM NIYATI!

Sage_Verse

4.8

64 Chs

Liked by 3 people

Replies5

Ignatious_Peter_0099Lv13

Author, when will you update the next chapter of your book?

4mth

KBKayboyLv11

I think he has dropped it

Ignatious_Peter_0099:Author, when will you update the next chapter of your book?

4mth

Sage_VerseAuthor

Sorry for not responding sir. I've not dropped it.. My shallow knowledge was unable to continue this epic so i was learning to improve it. Plus my dreadful result gave me a little trauma. Couldn't write more than a paragraph. Now, i am back. Don't worry k. I promise to be with it till the end

1mth

Ignatious_Peter_0099Lv13

Thanks for replying to my query. Don't let your past define you. All the best. Looking forward to the next update. Will you be able to update the next chapter before June 1,2025?

Sage_Verse:Sorry for not responding sir. I've not dropped it.. My shallow knowledge was unable to continue this epic so i was learning to improve it. Plus my dreadful result gave me a little trauma. Couldn't write more than a paragraph. Now, i am back. Don't worry k. I promise to be with it till the end

1mth

Sage_VerseAuthor

No, it would he sooner. much sooner i think, I'm currently working on it.

Ignatious_Peter_0099:Thanks for replying to my query. Don't let your past define you. All the best. Looking forward to the next update. Will you be able to update the next chapter before June 1,2025?

1mth

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This work is pretty good! The addition of Nyati, Maa Shakti and Even Prithvi Maa have made this a piece of ART! For anyone searching for a work without the interference of unnecessary or broken system, it is a great place! Though a little slow initially... Nevertheless, I loved reading the first 41 chapters! Plus, there's almost little to no grammatical mistake!

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Author please come back, we miss you dearly

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When it's about KARNA it has to be the best 👍👍👍👍Great work

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Vali_3582Lv5

Good idea because most of the TV series are altered from the OG books for example Karna became victim of cast without even knowing what is a suta? i like this fanfiction unlike others because it gives reference to books by sages or vedas

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Cherry_1753Lv13

I loved this novel bro as other novels don't have this much knowledge depth on our history please come back and continue bro

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Please update this story.I am a fan of your book.

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