Item: MAHABHARAT: FREEDOM FROM NIYATI!
Rating: 5
Author: Its_Praveen

Its_PraveenLv151yr

2024-04-03 01:55

Completed first volume❤️. Honestly best of best version of karna in this platform. Niyati, prakrithi ma, Kaali Ma, Yemuna, Suryadev, and our Karna. Every characters i loved. Felt so peaceful to read, perspective of each characters made me goosebumps. Also i hope the future readers will never get negative results of Shri krishna. He is a “Poorna roopa avatar”- direct form of god of creation and the only gos descended on real body for dharma. Not even sree ram is not a god- rather avatar. So he is powerful beyond human imagination, the thoughts of him even Mahadev cant predict. OM namo narayanaya:, Om Namo Krishnaya:, Radhe radhe❤️ Thanks, Vasudeva Kudumba: -Universe is our family

MAHABHARAT: FREEDOM FROM NIYATI!

Sage_Verse

4.8

64 Chs

Liked by 7 people

Replies3

Sage_VerseAuthor

To Praveen, In this work, anything like defaming the esteemed deities, deforming their characters and manipulating others to believe in lies is something that I never longed for. There might be sometime where you might think that I am insulting some characters by mentioning their deeds that were not truly partial to others. But, Even Shri Krishna had to bear the full brunt of his deeds in the form of Devi Gandhari's curse. Though he had done everything for the Universe, for the humans, for the dharma, it didn't cover his sin of taking away Kauravas from her Mother, did it? Therefore, if you think that something is wrong with my descriptions, please wait till the end, after all, half knowledge is worse than none. Lastly, thanks for the review! Hope you will remain till the end~

1yr

Ignatious_Peter_0099Lv13

Author,when will you update your book?

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Its_PraveenLv15

I am also waiting for him to start updating 🥹

Ignatious_Peter_0099:Author,when will you update your book?

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